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Turn-Tech Control

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Based off of Ms. Paint Adventure, Dave specfiecly, the pic technicly should be a Gear or Dave's turn-techs....
In my MTG OC storyline, I burrowed some ideas and molded them to fit.
The contecept is You make a gear, then if you have enoff mana, more of said gears. Once they are spinning at the correct speed you "break" them and make a time bubble.
But in card form it needs tweaking, I knowit, but I cant see it, yet.
I would like some look overs, but if you don't like it completely, then go away.
Credit is on the card.
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THe multikicker isn't really necessary - how often do you have much more than 2RRRRRRR lying around? What could make an interesting idea would be to lower the starting cost by R or so, giving it multikicker of about 1R, and saying it comes into play with a counter for each time it was kicked. Finally, the number of counters could be lowered, or make the counter-giving ability one that happens a bit more often. Say, whenever you cast a spell, or whenever a creature you control hits an opponent. That could make it a bit more powerful, make it feel a bit more red, and make it a bit cool as it allows more combo-ability.